Really nicely done. Thank you.

i don't usually like fics but i do like this one. i hope you do keep writing :)

Oh man. I was trolling back through some older NCIS stories and found this. This is so sweet and tender, so loving, and so very beautiful.

I was just watching the episode "SWAK" for only the second time (had a hard time getting ahold of it) and you can really see in that episode that Gibbs purely and simply loves Tony, no matter how you might construe or interpret it. The increasing desperation with which he searches for an 'antidote', the utter shock on his face when the microbiologist tells him of the 15% survival chances, and his certainty that the force of his love can keep Tony alive when nothing else in the universe can help him, all demonstrate the true depth of his feelings for the younger man.

So reading this lovely piece just served to sort of illumine the undercurrents of that episode for me. And I must say, so many stories can't capture the gentle sweetness and tenderness that men are certainly capable of without making them seem effeminate or just weak; but you managed it extraordinarily well. You didn't ignore or minimise their personal issues or insecurities; you just somehow managed to point up the fact that strong but flawed men are as capable as anyone of loving tenderness.

Gah, I'm beginning to ramble but the simple fact is I really, REALLY loved this piece. And your English is very good; the only serious error I noted was a subject/verb order problem : you wrote "I really didn't like very much you back then;", proper order in English should be "I really didn't like you very much back then;". The subject, "you" should come right after the verb "like", not after the modifiers "very much". Other wise, your English is excellent.

I sent this story straight to favorites and I know I'll be reading it often; it's like getting a cuddle! Great job.

Perfect, they both are perfect together. That's very cute, you wrote this fiction very well. (I'm french, I hope I didn't do any mistake...)

Lovely

This story reads like I'm being sub-merged into a hot bath...really good! Thank you

I loved it! It was so sweet; and there were barely any errors at all, don't worry.

Amazing really great can't wait to read more of your stories.

Beautifu an' sweet.