I enjoyed reading your alternate ending, in a way this is more like the ending Harry really deserved, though personally I prefer the sweetness of the anime's ending. But I enjoyed reading this one too, you captured them very well ^^

You have no need for a cop-out. Very nice alternate ending. Perfect renditions of the characters, and Bunji is always cool. Always.

Drak got me to watch this series and somehow I KNEW you would write something. I love this. I love the series and I love seeing good fanfiction about it.

i like the ending-
It’s just an ordinary blue sky.
nice. and 's real good for a first attempt. keep it up. *nods* yuppie!;3

I love gungrave it's like ny favorite animebut i don't know. which is better samurai champloo or gungrave?well anyway i love the ending to all the normal gungrave episodes (yaknow when harry and brandon are running in the feild with blue skys)the musics in my head right now. ... I like the priganel ending to gungrave cause the really cool fight scene but i like your version too

Best part of the whole story, I always say, is the last few lines. That goes for this story too, in my opinion.

YOU WROTE A GUNGRAVE FIC!

I knew you'd do it. Ah hum, anyway. I really liked this, I think I'm one of the few people who LOVED how the whole thing ended in the anime.