Hi, thanks for writing this, I liked the story, thought the investigation was a bit fast,on screen it probably would have had to be played out a bit more and been more complex and I like the intermittant scenes in the Psych's office.

this is really good, like amn eppy. keep up the good stuff!!

I really like this, the interaction the members of the squad and outside officers. It goes back to the first episode when Jim himself he wouldn't want to work with a blind cop and here he was expecting others to do it.

I also like that JIm and Christie are talking. I want to see how things progress because I like the fact we see a cop in a couple situation that needs work. This is closer to reality than any Survivor show and you have captured it in your story.

great job!! I am looking forward to the next chapter!