Brilliant story. Who needs a TV-show when there are such good stories out in the W. Keep going on that way. I realy love it.

Great work--you weave the most amazing tales--I hope somewhere out there you're also making a living at this craft--you're truly gifted!

It wasn't confusing in the least. You did a great job tying up all the loose ends and handling all the characters. I really enjoy reading your fiction. Keep it coming, please!

Loved it, loved it, loved it. Not only is the story itself good, but it also has been interesting to watch you develop as a writer over the course of your Blind Justice fics. And - best of all - you promised a "next time." Can't wait!

Wow! You did a really great job with this. I especially loved the ending. I love how Jim and Christie continue to grow through the story. You know I love the crossovers, too. I'm actually thinking about attempting one, but we'll see. Again, thanks so much for sticking with the story, for giving it life. You are definitely an asset to this fandom.

I'm glad you gave us this story, and I'm sorry it's over.
I can't wait until your next story.

I especially like the way you portrayed the Law and Order characters and Jim's friend from the old days. I also like the way you portrayed Jim and Christie: yes, they still have some problems, but they are working on them, and they do love each other.

The story has gotten even better if that's possible. I hadn't watched Law and Order, Criminal Intent in some time and reading your story has made me tune in again! Thanks for a great read!

Definitely fast-paced, and also worth the wait!

WOW! I just discovered how much further this story has progressed. Very well done, great story line, great plot, imaginative, and although I am not familiar with many of the other "cop" characters you have brought in, the interaction is excellently done. So, now that you finally have us at this incredible cliffhanger, I really hope you don't intend to keep us hanging for too long!

Thanks for the great entertainment on a dark and wet Saturday afternoon!

“Jimmy, could you come get me. I’m afraid to move.”

“Christie,” Jim whispered, “tell me where you are, I’ll find you.”

I love this part at the end. Jim's the one she calls, because he's the one she knows will protect her, blind or not.

Chapter 13! Wow!! You think it's going one way and you wonder what happened to Jim, then you get jerked in the opposite direction!

oh goodness, i had caught the beginning of this ages and ages ago and didn't realise you had written so much more. I know I am suposed to wrtite a "well rounded review but I have no critisism - I loved it.

This is superbly written, I am hooked and every scene is as clear in my head as if it were filmed.

Having a sneak peak into Jim's past was riveting and the secne between him and his old friend was so real I almost shivered.

Also the balance between drama and crime is good, real good, so often these fan fics become drama shows only. But this is wonderful.

I so hope you are continueing I really want to know how this goes and I am enjoying the journey heaps!

Thankyou for keeping BJ alive!

Wonderful, as usual! Thanks for writing more. Love the descriptions of J in his old hood. Excellent imagery as always.
Thanks!

I'm really enjoying the backstory about Jim. It's not too noble, and it shows a young Jim who could have gone either way.

Good luck with the class assignments; if you do as well there as here, you should get A's for them all.