|Reviews for Olfactory Flaw|
| Varun Dhawan 1/18/13 . chapter 1
KIBA IS REALLY AN IDIOT xD
| Totoro504 7/17/12 . chapter 1
Why I have never thought the idea of Kiba being able to smell girls on their period or Hinata seeing some other guy's junk makes me feel stupid. Once again, you prove how much of a genius you are!
| Emmygirl94 6/14/12 . chapter 1
Very well written story, the period twist is new to me but not bad. I just have one question, when she said "I can see you" what did that mean?
| chocovic-chu 1/10/12 . chapter 1
nice kibahina ttebayo! haha
did it mean that they... liked... each other?
expected so XB
| honeybeeze 10/20/11 . chapter 1
... *Blink blink* Oh my gosh, Hinata! You perv. *blush* heh heh, I bet you can see him alright... Wait then who else... lol funny and cute story . And not gonna lie, I'm sure you answered alot of people who asked themselves about Kiba and his great smelling ability lol.
| SarahiNia 9/19/11 . chapter 1
hahah...haha! omg that was awesome! :)
| random lurker 8/19/11 . chapter 1
"I can see you."
OMG LOL! I seriously laughed out loud at the irony here! haha either that or I have been reading too many lemons :s
| Priscilla Diane 8/1/11 . chapter 1
Pfffttt! That's gross! She shouldn't abuse her Byuakugan in such ways! If thats the case, then her 'I can see you' comment applies for everyone. Haha, I laugh at this fact :3
| een nihc 6/21/11 . chapter 1
That is way too cute. oh, Hinata, you should be careful where you look. Hehe.
| Axiome 5/17/11 . chapter 1
Near the end cracked me up. And it's funny people reviewing and asking what Hinata meant by 'I can see you'.
| LM22102 4/26/11 . chapter 1
Hm. I, unfortunately, did not have the same realization as Kiba. What does she mean by seeing him? Surely, of some love thing, or whatnot. In the way of, I can see you blushing, or I can you see you care, or etc etc.
But what did she mean EXACTLY?
| bindedtogether 3/22/11 . chapter 1
| Verisimilitude1218 2/1/11 . chapter 1
That last part was hilarious. I really like Hinata and Kiba together, they're cute
| LunaAngelDarkestRose 12/1/10 . chapter 1
tht was good
| shelwyn 8/9/10 . chapter 1
I read thourgh all the reviews for this story. I'd say abour 1/3rd of the coments are people asking what the I can see you part means. I loved your story. Keep it up.