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| Liv 2008-01-11 ch 6, anon. | abuseWHOA thats was good! I have one thing to ask of you though...WRITE MORE! please!! |
| InOcEnT-schoolgirl 2007-09-26 ch 7, anon. | abuseHehe- very amusing LOL Aww... cute too though!! Oh an god Ione is good!! =D if your continuing update soon!! |
| cocochan94 2007-08-28 ch 7,  | abuseHahahah. YAY! An Ancient Future story with more then 3 chapters! Well this is hilarious and the characters fit so well. Awesome job! Update soon please! |
| Mystique-Jay 2007-08-03 ch 1, | abuseIt is a really good story and nice of you to finish it for your friend. I always look for good desriptions and out of ten i would give this about a 7. |
| relianth 2007-07-06 ch 7, | abuseHaha, I really enjoy this story. It's funny as well :D. I can't wait for the chapter! |
| rachael's bookshop 2007-01-19 ch 7, | abuseyeah please do go on i love this story i think its great... i love how the characters are like how they are in teh books but they have the younger teenager about them too... its so funny and lovable please keep going... |
| celticas 2007-01-05 ch 7, | abusehey, glad to see you update finally, i had sort of given up hope of hearing from you again. Good chapter, love the evil tory very her. Cant wait for Part 2 |
| tigerlily1992 2006-12-28 ch 5, | abuseI like this story, u cant find any could stories on this site so i think so far yours the best :} |
| celticas 2006-11-10 ch 6, | abuseyou really should update moe offten. |
| DestinyEntwinements 2006-09-10 ch 5, | abuseO.o...hope you updaate..again...? |
| Corlath 2006-06-10 ch 5, | abusei just wanted to say that i've enjoted the hole thing so far. and in the the books i remember that Katren was much harded for brockwell to finally convince her to go out with him, how come she is so much more foreward in this? |
| celticas 2006-05-20 ch 2, | abuseUPLOAD UPLOAD UPLOAD UPLOAD |
| cerasi1 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Normally I don't read AU, but there's something strangely appealing about this idea. Do go on... |
| whiz 2006-04-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseI'm really liking the cute-n-fluffy teen issue direction this story is taking. And the challange of dealing with the tag-along on the date..! Tehe Although to be honest, I'm getting the feeling the something big needs to happen soon though. It's been lovely with the essential getting-to-know-you type stuff but a good plot line can't revolve around nothing - there needs to be some conflict! Something to show how the characters work under pressure. At least, that's just what I'm feeling at the moment. I can see you building up to something big, though, with the camping trip idea - very interested to see what that will take us! Keep writing - it's great! OH and one last thing: "...knowing fully well that nobody save for Tory could convince Tory to come out of denial" - was this bit deliberate repitiion or a typo? I didn't quite get it. |
| celticas 2006-03-22 ch 5, | abusehey mel. Im glad that your glad that i laughed and no i will not send you a letter bomb unless you compleatly f**k up this story so keep on the way you are and you will be fine :) okay Ione still to playful otherwise great!1 |