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Reviews For: Intermezzo Con Anima

Dragon Eye Girl
2008-06-09
ch 1,
abuseOh...that's hot...
Grim
2006-02-03
ch 1, anon.
abusegood start would love to see more though
Neo Scarf
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuseI must say, this is quite good...although you forget irritability as a stage of a hangover.
Kay Yasha
2006-01-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell, since I've already glomped you on the Db forum, I can't do it again. I might squish you.
Anyway, I think the 'kitten' petname is priceless. You're a really great writer. Wish I could write femslash.
Scarabbug
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuseI see you've picked up on practically the only two characters available for femslash and made it work. Sure there's not a bit of leftovers going on (well not leftovers, but you know what I mean.) ;P

They DO work as a pairing though. Interetsing that, and Kitten as a petname just seems so... apt, in an ironic way. Hee ^_^

Grammar... probably not in my best interests to correct the grammar of my own beta, but I can't see much to worry about that you won't see better anyways.

I like it. Squee. ^_^
The Lightning Flash
2006-01-24
ch 1,
abuseRed silk seems very appropriate, though it'd clash with Kitt's colours. :P

So, this is what England inspires? :P
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