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| Dragon Eye Girl 2008-06-09 ch 1, | abuseOh...that's hot... |
| Grim 2006-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abusegood start would love to see more though |
| Neo Scarf 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI must say, this is quite good...although you forget irritability as a stage of a hangover. |
| Kay Yasha 2006-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, since I've already glomped you on the Db forum, I can't do it again. I might squish you. Anyway, I think the 'kitten' petname is priceless. You're a really great writer. Wish I could write femslash. |
| Scarabbug 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseI see you've picked up on practically the only two characters available for femslash and made it work. Sure there's not a bit of leftovers going on (well not leftovers, but you know what I mean.) ;P They DO work as a pairing though. Interetsing that, and Kitten as a petname just seems so... apt, in an ironic way. Hee ^_^ Grammar... probably not in my best interests to correct the grammar of my own beta, but I can't see much to worry about that you won't see better anyways. I like it. Squee. ^_^ |
| The Lightning Flash 2006-01-24 ch 1, | abuseRed silk seems very appropriate, though it'd clash with Kitt's colours. :P So, this is what England inspires? :P |