 Nagi Eden 2009-02-26 . chapter 11I been wondering but why you choose to do Crisis on infinite digiworlds first before Tamers. I mean the firepower be greater and easier to progress |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-12 . chapter 11done. another excellent story, and indeed this was a long chapter...so now are you technically trying to re-write 03, or is that an inaccurate assessment?
PS: I actually think that Tai and Sora would at least manage to score a few more points even with Ken as their opponent, after all Ken isn't as good as he had been as the Emperor, or at least not as durable since he's only a human now... |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-12 . chapter 10Well done. KingEtemon's defeat was an appropriate one for a digimon of his 'unique' status. The scene with Wolfgang Dietz and the spinning was funny.
Also, I enjoyed the background story to the band.
NO! IZZY'S LAPTOP! So far that's two priceless Digidestined 'items' you've destroyed...at least Izzy's taking the loss of his laptop better than Tai's taking the loss of his hair... |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-11 . chapter 9NO! NOT TAI'S HAIR! ANYTHING BUT THAT!
... in all seriousness this was another awesome chapter and I enjoyed your masterful merging of multiple fronts into one front thus giving you less side stories to write about.
Curious how both the Female Rocketeers and the gang decided to help, but not totally unrealistic (at least not in the context of a story about digital monsters)
I finally got my answer as to what would happen if Etemon met Datamon, and it was as I had foreseen, except that for that this Datamon is a different Datamon...curious, anyway I hope to finish this story tomorrow so beware I will soon be able to criticize you for not updating quick enough...cheers!
(and by the way, I gotta say I like the way you handle Dietz's character in both the Author's note and the story) |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-11 . chapter 8hooray for Dietz! "He was like a demon. A laughing demon with a penchant for dangerous stunts and unintentionally humorous comments, but a demon nonetheless."
hooray for the return of Wizardmon!
hooray for the hilarious antics of KingEtemon!
(there that's three hoorays I am ready for the powers of three now...) |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-10 . chapter 7...huh. Not what I was expectin' at all! I guess I shouldn't have automatically assumed Etemon would digivolve to MetalEtemon...anyways another good chapter and I will probably enjoy reading about Dietz fighting with the plasma swords.
And so the plot gets more complicated. And now there is also the return of the Female Rocketeers, will the insanity never cease? Ah well, insanity has a tendency to be hilarious, so as long as it stays that way you can write all the insanity you want (case in point, Davis's dream in "Housemates") |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-10 . chapter 6another excellent chapter. I am intrigued with the return of the bullies and I wonder if Datamon and Etemon will meet up again, because I imagine if they did it would be hilarious.
Ah well, must continue reading to find out |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-10 . chapter 5yes, I did get the references to The Earthquake of MetalGreymon (the 20th Episode of 01)
I can't believe it took Izzy this long to figure out who 'the King' is.
I am quite happy with the return of Dietz as I found his character to be hilarious in Zero 2: A Revision, one last thought, what exactly is Oikawa's role in this story...ah well, I suppose that only time will tell right? |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-10 . chapter 4Another amazing chapter. You've truly captured Etemon's character perfectly. Also the massive facefaulting scene was hilarious.
And the Tentomon-Izzy scenes were funny ("Pardon me Izzy, but what's a hobo?")
I also like the way you develop your OCs so that I can get a good feel for who they are, yet you do it in a manner that doesn't disrupt the story.
Keep up the good work!! |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-09 . chapter 3who indeed would use a plate for a mask?...anyway this story just keeps getting funnier and funnier as I read on.
"But then Murphy's Law kicked in"...somehow I don't think Murphy's Law took evil Elvis impersonating monkey Digimon into consideration when it was created... |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-09 . chapter 2this story is hilarious! The portrayal of Etemon is very good and the police scene was excellent ("it seems our perp has some strange tastes") Keep up the excellent work! |
 the21stMartian 2008-11-09 . chapter 1Hooray for Etemon! All hail Etemon the King!
In case you can't tell from the above exclamations, Etemon was one of my favorite characters in both 01 and 02, and since he came at the same time Piximon was introduced, episodes 15-20 of 01 are my favorite segment of digimon (though I also like the battle between MetalEtemon and Puppetmon)
and yes this was handled very well. |
 king who 2008-04-17 . chapter 11Ah, so the tamers finally make their way into the scene only to be interrupted by this crisis of infinite digital worlds.
Wow, I loved Etomon in this story. The way he was referring to his slaves as groupies. And this new double armor with Cody and the one with Daisuke. I'll admit, the fight scene was cheesy with the song but it was good.Anf this new group who was drilling? I wonder wh they were. Oh well, Guess I'm off to sleep |
 Ikaru Kakou 2008-03-05 . chapter 11Pure, unadulturated, win. Much better than my own writing (then again, I'm still noobish. You've been at it for years!). I have to say though, I agree with you on the funniest moment. Weirdest Dream Ever was, in my opinion, the written version of what I would assume a good acid trip is like. And that's a good thing.
But onto stuff from this story:
The Izzy-Genai twist was unexpected.
Dietz coming back was kickass. I hope to see much more of him in the future.
Teenage Wolves was indeed awesome, you're sure there's no more fics about them out there? There should be... *hinthintcough*writemoreplease*coughhinthint*
And of course, who could forget the image of Tai without his charicteristic hair?! PRICELESS. |
 Nesha1 2007-06-24 . chapter 11An interesting ending to this story. I've thoroughly enjoyed it. (Even though I've never watched Frontier or Tamers, and have no knowledge of who this..."Takato and Gulimon" is.) The only disappointed thing I'd have to say is that I'm saddened that there weren't any Mimato scenes...considering that this story was about Matt...somewhat.
Fave Chapter: A Happy Day
Fave Humor Piece: When Etemon said, "Come on my groupies, carry me!" in Lupine Blues. I STILL laugh when I think about that because it reminds me so much of the Chappelle's Show when he did his Rick James parodies! (Don't know if you've ever watched it.)
Fave New Power: Double Armor Digivolving! I have to say that in your story...CODY ROCKS! I always looked over him, but you've given him so much DEPTH! And not to mention that I believe he's the only one who can Double Armor Digivolve AND merge with his Digimon!
Fave Teenage Wolf: Akira hands down. He reminds me of me a little bit. I too grew up in a single parent household. But my father wasn't a rich politican...no, no, no he was FAR from that. (Won't get into it because it's personal.)
Fave Part of KingEtemon Battle: I would have to say Live and Learn. They lyrics just...MESHED well with everything that was going on in the battle. Nice.
Fave Twist: Izzy becoming Gennai's apprentice! That was a SHOCKER!...and the Republican President being a good guy! (Sorry...HAD to sneak that one in! -_-)
Fave Story: Revision
Fave Chapter: The chapter in Housemates when the Rocketeers (I'm probably their only fan) kidnapped Yolei, and the big girl yells out, "DID YOU MAKE SWEET LOVE TO HIM UNDERNEATH THE CHERRY BLOSSOM TREE?" (Or something to that affect.)
Fave Villian: Darkheart-hands down. He's so...SEXY! (Again, I'm probably the only one who feels that way about him. Ideas of an NC-17 involving him and Kari floats around in my head. *sighs* YES, I'm a fan of adult material, and with Darkheart's...personality...I can see potential stories *or at least a one-shot* involving him and Kari together. I would NEVER write it, though. But it doesn't hurt to think.)
Fave New Digimon: MetalAngemon! Beats Teapotmon ANYDAY!
Fave Original Character: The Rocketeers
Fave Laugh-Out-Loud Moment: When Davis stood up in the movie theater and yelled, "THIS SUCKS!" at the movie screen. (I've never seen it, but Gigli can not be THAT bad...can it?)
Fave Battle: The End of All Things: Digiknight vs. (Insert-Name-Here-Because-My-Paris-Hilton-Sized-Brain-Forgot)Myotistmon fought. I was on the edge of my SEAT!
Fave Canon Character: I LOVED what you did with Davis! Can say the same for my other faves, but here they are: Tai, Mimi...and that's it! LoL!
Fave Canon Re-Imagining: Oikawa's just...I LOVED what you did with him. In the series...he just pops in and out...like that! I WOULD LOVE to see him interacting with Cody and Mrs. Hida, though. Consider they have both Daniel and Hiroki in common. You haven't really dwelled on that, but the series did. That's probably the ONLY thing I could say about the series that I liked involving Oikawa.
Story Looking Foward to Most: Past Journeys. The others...I...don't know, especially Tamers since I'm not familiar with it. Not really looking to get familiar with it, either. Hey! If Davis, Tai, and Mimi aren't going to be in the show, why bother? I ALMOST didn't watch 02 because they practically kicked Mimi off the series!
Fave Twist: Too many to name.
Absolute Fave Moment: Again, too many to name, but one in particular is when Davis was playing "Simple and Clean" for Jun and Jim at the park, and he began to feel envious towards them because he always fantasized him and Kari dancing together to that song. |
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