 Eyeshield 10/1/11 . chapter 3I love these kinds of stories. Thank you, dear author. |
 HAAAM 1/21/11 . chapter 3 Cream should end up flying like an ace |
 MegaMonZX0-FF 6/19/10 . chapter 3I read this a year ago, and now, it still holds up. This is a REALLY well written fan fiction. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Falcool 1/6/10 . chapter 3I don't think you have failed to make the story interesting at all! I was certainly captured by it. Hope you can get to update soon, since it would really make me happy to see another chapter. And i just want to say something i forgot to say in the first review. I am a HUGE Zelda fan! And Paper mario too! Nice to meet a fellow fan :D |
 asudaf 10/18/09 . chapter 3Please update! I'd like to see how this is going to turn out. |
 Kyle XY 6/12/09 . chapter 3Hey don't sweat about it, the chapter turned out great! I can't wait to read the next chapter , I wounder how Cream will handle the X-Tornado, especially with Tails sitting with her XD. Well update soon and don't stress over it, after all, IT'S SUMMER! |
 pvtllchurch95 2/14/09 . chapter 3 I don't think this chapter was boring, it's about things that we always question ourselves and how we try our hardest to not love the person you fell for. This is my favorite chapter out of them all and you inspired me to write stories of my own too. Thank You, and Thank You for writing a story that is not only romantic, but also shows the battles we have inside us. Thank You.
From future writer,
pvtllchurch95 (name is from ) |
 alexis 1/15/09 . chapter 3 I WANT MORE! it's so cute! |
 JordanTH 7/18/08 . chapter 2WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER? |
 JordanTH 7/7/08 . chapter 3When are you putting up the next chapter? D
This story is going on my favorites list btw D |
 Kais-loan 3/7/08 . chapter 2Wait a second...2 years? I'm gonna be waiting a long time arnt I? |
 Some random person. XD 2/17/08 . chapter 3 You should REALLY update soon. This is such a wonderful story, it's not at all boring. I like how you described the character's emotions with such ease, your writing makes me want MOAR of this story! |
 Kais-loan 2/16/08 . chapter 1im tierd... |
 Kais-loan 1/21/08 . chapter 3AW CUMON! dont juice me up and leave me dangeling!
carry on please, i cant sleep at night! |
 kalsanda 11/7/07 . chapter 3 i really like this one! please update with more chapters soon! |