this is great, longer chapters maybe? other then that i love this story and i look forward to chapter six.

thewomanwhosoldtheworld

This is very nice and so moving, it's unusual to see Irina so closed off and pessimistic, I really want to know why she is like that, I hope that you update soon. Keep up the good work

Really emotional, well done!
Serious. Please remember to update!

I really want to find out what happens next, please update

FAITH! come back and update man!
You can't leave it THERE?!! Pause for a sec havin' that baby and COME BACK!! What happens next??!!
j/k...can't wait for more!

~Nicole of twin*muse

Try TRY! Oh please try!
Love me some toasterficage!
I love what she says about what she took away from Jack. Cause it's soo true.
Can't wait for more Faith!!

~Nicole of twin*muse

Great first chapter can't wait for the next one.