I love how you told the story from Bebedora's point of view; it'd definetly be interesting hearing her thoughts of the situations in the story. You've kept her and Maru much in character too, though the story seemed to centric around them just a little too much(it is a one-shot though, so I guess it's okay).

~ CupidKirby(TwisterKirby)

aww thats cute.

and funny. Bebedora makes me laugh :D

will there be more??

Oh, dear! that was expectacular! two thumbs up.
By the way, can you do some KhargXPaullette? Or at least Kill Lilia? PLEASE!

~Alias-Hawk
P.s.: ok, I'll be happy if you do the Lilia pert. SHE DESERVES TO DIE! MWAHAHAHAHA WAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA!..ahem..

The was truly awsome. It's hard to find good Arc the Lad fanfiction, but you can really write! I'm hoping for a Darc and Delma chapter next.

That was pretty good, but do Darc and Delma!

Glad to see someone rote a good Maru x Bebedora fic. Arc the Lad fics, especially good ones, are so hard to come by. Anyway, I think you got Bebedora very IC and how things are with her and Maru's relationship currently, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.
PS: Next chapter, make it either Darc x Lilia or Kharg x Paulette

aw cute a Maru and Bebedora oh you should make a Lillia and Darc one I just adore that couple.

That was a good story. I like the Maru x Bebedora paring.