Story;s nice. Hope ya update soon!

Just caught this so I don't know how awful it was before. Doesn't matter though, because its awesome now. You're a skilled writer, there are no noticeable errors - I doubt I'd find any if I tried. All the characters are portrayed nicely. I hope to see more of this.

Great beginning. I can't wait to see how Hogwarts treats Danny when they discover he is related to the infamous 'killer' Sirius Black.

Nice. Great chapter. Please update soon.

Nice story so far.

Please update when you can and take care!

I really like your story, and im going to ask for u to update, even though u havent since 06. i WILL read it, and i will review. SO PLEASE add next chappy!

One little note: People can't apparate in Hogwarts. Just thought I'd clear that up. Update soon and have you considered getting a beta reader? It'd help clear up any remaining grammar mistakes.

*sighs* Grammar is way better here. You've spaced it out, too.

Did your friend Beth proofread this story? In any case, it is filled to the brim with glaring grammar mistakes. Either you need to reedit it or get a beta reader. Besides the glaring errors, it's a good story and I'll now be moving on to the rest of the chapters. *sneaks away*

I decided to stop by and read a story of yours after seeing you left me a review, but now I almost wish I hadn't. The premise of your story is perfectly fine, in fact, the characters seem pretty good and really, all the content seems lined up for a very enjoyable read.

If only this chapter was readable. You even say you had it proof-read? Well I apologize to your friend Beth, but get another proof-reader. Hell, running this thing through spell-check would probably clear up most of the mistakes. You don't capitalize names, you don't capitalize the starts of sentences, I saw a semi-colon in the middle of Dumbledore's name, you don't separate dialogue from paragraphs, you don't form enough paragraphs and any other number of technical errors. Please do fix it up and let me know when you do, because I'm actually quite interested in this story, I just can't read it when it's so... it's not even unpolished, it just isn't done.

i love, i love, i love. write more.

great chapter! please update soon! :D

Promising. Continue?

awesome! try to get the next part up soon ur doin good so far

update soon!