where is the rest of the story? :S

LOVE IT! KEEP WRITING

Love what you have so far. I think that you may have given up though. Oh well. You have a gift. Good luck to you!

that is such a great story you need to update and continue writing. I love all of the action so far and cant wait to read the rest.

Please finish the next chapter soon! Edward and Bella have too stay together they can't loose each other!

Hey,
i was just wondering when you will be updatinf you story?And btw your story is AWESOME!

Your Story Is Very Intresting... It Kind Of Reminds Me Of Charmed... Your Story Is Really Unique And In A Good Way To! I Look Foward To Anyother Chapters that you come up with! damn this is a good story...


Your Story Is Like A Drug To Me...


:D Love Ashley Maria

aw i loved it cant wait read the next 1

im really comfused

So is the story like over if it is that was amazingly great if not please write more

theres something unerving about this story i dont think i can read it and btw edward seems too distant and the whole knife thing ...y wud a vamp need a nife..no offence its ace x

what the hell is it with u people who just stop?!?! come on! hurry up and finish! it dosent take 2 years 2 wrte a story, thats not even professonal!

I love your story! U r so creative! I wish I could write like u! Hope u get the next chapter up soon!

I thought that was awsome-you should totaly contine this. Ive been reading tons of the fanfiction for twilight and i think your the first to realy carry on Stepheinie Meyers characters in the same tone as the books. Well done-Good job. Thanks! Keep it up!

OMG THAT IS AN AWESOME STORY it was kind of confusing at first but i think it is really good please update soon :3