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Reviews for: Dealer Busts
Cutter12 8/20/10 . chapter 1
I always felt none of the other characters understood how Larry was feeling during this episode. Your line"No alcoholic every truly recovers, so they? That's why it was so difficult to visit that casino with you. Like… well, like putting a rehabbing drunk in a bar..." was exactly how I felt. Good job. :)
ladybrin 12/10/06 . chapter 1
again this was a good story- it was just soo full of emotions-
sabra jaguar 8/11/06 . chapter 1
hello. I love your insight into the character of Larry Fleinhardt. He's so endearing and it's nice to see focus on him once in a while. Just thought you should know, I really enjoyed your story.
prin69 1/29/06 . chapter 1
wonderful. i did feel so bad for larry. having that problem, and being sucked into it, no matter how temporairy, again.
Harm Marie 1/25/06 . chapter 1
This was a really good story. Larry's "skeletons" made me curious though.
pucktofaerie 1/25/06 . chapter 1
hm...interesting. I was glad when they added something dark to Larry. This is a great little piece. Keep up the great work!
D. Lerious 1/24/06 . chapter 1
VEry touching! loved how he mentioned the talk w/Don!:). btw is it me or is Alan's sudden willingness to play poker w/CHarlie inconsistant?
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