It may be hard to get into his head, but you did a good job of it.

Yes-Mitsukake's hard to write about, but you did it so well! D I like how you add some original ideas on top of the story without alternating the character. Great!

(Whaaaa... I forgot to add Mitsukake into my story, I will do that now. I always hate Mitsukake. He was useless. He couldn't save Nuriko or Chiriko. He didn't do *anything*! Well, now you've made me change my mind. Arigatou.)

*contented sigh* Beaaaaaaaaautiful. And, I agree about Mitsukake...I attempted to write him once...and failed miserably...so I'll just stick to Nuriko for now. :) Anyway...*ahem* Despite however difficult it might have been to write him, Mitsukake is absolutely flawless in this piece. His personality shines through...and the piece itself is so wonderfully written and so splendidly thought-out...*sigh* Ahhh, it sucks you in from the first sentence...maybe the first word. Brrrrrravo. :)

Very nice story. It is good to see something written in Mitsukake's POV for a change. This was a very moving emotional story, and it reminded me of how sad episode 33 was. I liked this one, keep it up!

*in tears and shambles* I never really realized it, but Mitsukake and Nuriko truly are identical in many ways. Very sweet, and extremely descriptive. You began with Nuriko's death, you made him reflect upon it, you made him accept it, and you let him hope. Perfect.

Simply beautiful. I love Mitsukake fics. I can't wait for your next one! You got into his head well, and brought out what I think would be his true thoughts. Thank you for a very moving fic!