"Atton shook his head. “I don’t care,” he said. “I’m coming with you.”
“As am I!” Mical cried.
“And me!” Sloe announced, coming out of his comatose silence.
“And me,” Mira said.
“As well as I,” said Visas.
“And me, too,” said Bao-Dur.
Mandalore was mute."

Is it wrong that I laughed at this part? (Especially "Mandalore was mute" - that REALLY made me snicker.)

I don't think the beginning or ending was weak! The ending was sad, I'll admit, but that's just because it ended Atton/Exile, not MICAL/Exile... :(

Still, great job, darling! :)

- SJ

You made me cry. T_T Been a while since that's happened...pweh...

Very nicely written. The ending was a little weak, but not extremely. This fic was cute, in its own way.

~Zen-chan

Very sad. Very sweet. Very Atton. Poor Mical=(

good story

Hm. I was stuck on my Atton/Exile scene for my next chap and then I read this. For some reason, it helped me. So thank you.

Cortessa, another great one. Do you have a factory or something? Call me crazy, but I think that you have your so-called 'weak endings' because you sub-consciously want to write series! So, please, stop leaving on cliff-hangers... please finish.

Must Mical be shunned in every story I read? Seriously...the poor guy. Anyway, excellent writing as always.