wow, that was...really good

Oooh... see, I like stuff like this... There's not much Serius POV, is there? It could use some fine-tuning, but it's great! Try sanding out those little bumps and irregularities... BTW, I don't mean any of this in a bad way. I'm a writer and nobody EVER criticizes my stuff, and it's SO annoying. I only point out the stuff that could be better if I see potential under it. Otherwise, I leave it alone. Just saying "Hey, it's good" is my worst insult... ;) Anyway, that said, you may want to read it silently a few times and then out loud. I've found that I get a lot better that way. Also, stop being so down on yourself in your summaries! *grins* *love and forever* Tessa

That wasn't odd, well, not THAT odd, it was cool, I would imagine that life 'on the run' is hard, specially when you're being chased by dementors, *shudders*, I luuurve Sirius! Love jona xxx

Hey hey! Nice job - who woulda known that underneath all that blonde hair of yours there's actually a brain? Off to read s'more stuffs now, "sis."

Good story. Maybe this should be in the Angst category, though.

it's good, starange but in a good way. - kat

Sometimes I to feel this way,nicely done.