Your stories are great. This one though hit a nerve in a good way. It's nice to know that there are women-motherly figures that care about Lex and Clark.

Keep writing.

I’m struck dumb. I think this is an excellent piece. Thank you for writing.

Very well written! I love your style.

Wow. That was a REALLY well done start.

I hope you are planning on continuing.

This was amazing! Flawless, provocative, cohesive, and eloquent. I forgot I was reading a story and actually felt like I was dreaming with Lex. Great insight into Lex and the mythological themes within the show. I loved the comparison to Jesus on the crucifix. I've always thought of Clark as either Jesus or Arthur.You are a talented writer and should really send your work to a publisher. You should definitely get something published.Your story was a pleasant surprise. Please write more fanfictions!

That was awesome! Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future...Keep up the awesome work!

This was a beuatifully written stiry.I could really feel the dream-like quality of Lex's surrondings.

I thought the use of the three mothers to show Lex what he should do was brilliant. After all, what mother wouldn't want her child to be loved or at least happy?

Truly amazing.

very good! whana reade more about it.. ) so please hurry up!