Aww I’m so happy for Monica, she now has a ‘new’ love interest Natalia… Amazing story and now I’m going to read the sequal!

There going to be free yeh, but Moniac the way who write your stories I bet there is going to be another twist lol!

And the escape starts, ahh I’m excited!

Haha, Elliot is going to find her, make babies and Leave ahaha, Great job, great job, great job!

I’m Hoping that Elliot is ok, A I hope that woman got away…. Liv need to learn how to play along for the time being, because she getting fucked up. Lol Love it all, love it all, do I have to say it every time?

Something’s up I can feel it? Lol Great job so far!

Loved this chapter, Olivia is my Hero. Your one of the first people to write in her personality correctly. She really is a take o shit type of Cop. Great Job. One question on my mind is are you like this character at all, or does she just have your name?

OMG what’s happening to Elliot, I hope he is ok…Love it so far! Breeding, I don’t like the idea of breeding for Olivia and Monica lol, but it’s something new I haven’t read in a story, some it should be interesting…

Interesting… I hope she’s ok. Any Who Love it!!

Lol I love how you put your self in the story! I Love it so far, keep up the great work. I’m a big fan!

Good story, please come out with the sequal soon!

horray! great ending!

EO!

onetreefan

I've been reading back-stories and such, and I stumbled on this fic. It's really really good, but I was wondering if it was dropped? I absolutely adore corrupt-gov't-type stories, especially ones with everybody's favorite Sex Crimes detectives. Please continue this?

Yay! I really like this story. please write an ending! :)

EOness
onetreefan

wow i cant wait for more...
nikki