Well, it shows that we shouldn't eat candy that's just lying around... It's a nice touch with the name (a robber named Rob). Did you know there is a parallell in real life? Some people do tend to find jobs that suit their names (like Mr. Splat & Mr. Wheedle researching urinary problems and Francis Crook wanting better conditions for prisoners.).
So yeah, great story a real enjoyable read.

too long but good

I had the feeling that they actually left the cash in the cashbox. Setup was perfect. :D

This is Priceless! Love that the twins hadn't actually set any traps, that it was only the thief's sweet tooth which did him in.

Nice. Love the imagery of the prank.

Very funny. I really enjoyed it.

I never would have thought that it was a man working for Zonko. I just thought it was an ordinary thief trying to steal from WWW.

Thank you for writing it.

KUTGW,

Noreen

Knew it was Gred and Forge's shop pretty early on. The Triwizard Toffees were great, right up thier alley.

I was wondering if the elf was Dobby till you had Rob say hello to Mr Zonko. Makes since, a bit of spying on your competitors, especially ones that are in the process of driving you out of business.

A fun tale.

That was fantastic! Rob's combined paranoia and carelessness did him in. Nice name for a thief, by the way.

Amusing. So smart he outsmarts himself.

-demonicnargles

Nicely done! :)

Hahahahaa! Genius! That was hilarious...

I loved the Riddles

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

That! Was AWESOME! I knew they weren't really protections in the first place, but the ending was great! And Mr Zonko! Brilliant story!

i'ts all right