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| Dannichu 2006-03-30 ch 3, | abuseI'm on a "reviewing you" spree at the moment. These are all really cool, and just so lovely when you don't want to have to read a 30+ chapter fic in order to read something decent, though I think the latter two chapters could be posted as one-shots in their own right. I like the ‘Time Flies’ best, since it was just so interesting to see Rikku and Paine already in a relationship and older than they are in the games. In fact, it's so rarely done, reading about older characters was a little strange to begin with. ‘Sometimes You Just Have to Hit Things’ (brilliant title by the way), I also really enjoyed since you write as Paine very well, and Rikku and Paine realizing that Shuyin was not pure evil was really original. ‘Shooting practice’ was just funny. The only annoying thing is there’s nothing bad about them I can find, which makes me sound like a total suck-up. ^^ I'm really looking forward to any more you may write, especially anything RikkuPaine-orientated. |
| fireinu 2006-03-22 ch 3, | abuseI like the chapter. |
| Ikonopeiston 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI must question the physical ability of anyone to wipe the back of his eyes. This would better be re-phrased. |
| Feezlekahn 2006-01-25 ch 2, | abuseI like the idea of your "drabbles", makes me think I should try to do something similar art-wise. I also like what you have so far...Though you could have mentioned they were here. |