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Catherine Willmon 2008
2007-12-28
ch 9,
abuseI knew Lita would end up with Randy. I don't think John changed at all (and I happen to love the man). And, I don't know why she talked to Edge. He was no good for her, either. She should've just walked away. But, the ending was great because Lita now has a real man in her life. Awesome job.

Update soon!

Love you much, Nina!
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 9,
abuseperfect ending, i ski[[ed the flashbacks considering i just read the fic lool! love this fic
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 8,
abusejohns horriable! glad randys there
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 7,
abusean abortion! oh wow!
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 6,
abuse“Shut up!”

John listened and kept his mouth shut.

“Why you shutting up?” Lita asked. “I didn’t mean shut up!”

i loved that and the ending!
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 5,
abuse“Maybe I do but your right I really care for John,” Lita smiled.

“So why you here with me?” Randy grinned. “Get out of my closet.”

i luved that! get out of my closet lol!
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 4,
abusefainally there together! bless
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 3,
abuseaw
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 2,
abusehonestly, it was good not like soul of the heart standard but this was onw of ur first ryt?
DangerousDaredevil
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abusenice beginning
XtreMePeroXwhygeN
2007-12-27
ch 9,
abusei loved it
foreverafan15
2007-12-27
ch 9,
abuseaw they got together yea lol i'm sure Randy will treat her so much better than John and i'm glad that she's cool with Adam hehe... well i got to go review your other story so bye lol...
Fozzy-Floozy
2007-12-27
ch 9,
abuseNice ending... she ended up w/ Randy, aw! i think they make such a cute couple.. lol.. i loved it!
Catherine Willmon 2008
2007-12-24
ch 8,
abuseWhat the hell?! Cena, man, what are you thinking?! Lita has already endured one bad abortion, she doesn't wanna go through it again! I bet you Edge gave him the heads up! I hope Cena comes to his senses and get her back!

Update soon!

Love you much, Nina!

P.S. I hope Amy finally reveals her painful secret about her uncle.
writers-dream93
2007-12-23
ch 8,
abuseWhat John said really shocked me... He doesn't want the baby :( I hope Amy ends up with Randy. This is a great chapter. Update soon!

- Bella :)
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