lol, yes, you could say that a man could dream on...lol hahah poor sasuke!! XP

hahahah when i read that sasuke's boxer shorts smelled like raid the first time, i didn't get it!! lol so then i went back and read it and then i was like OH raid- the bug repellent spray...lol hahahahahaha i GET IT! XD

lol loved it

Wow this was an awesome story and thinking about these character they all needed some time at charm school :)

Man i love your story!

did you know that people actualyl qouteed most of the lines here and put it on thier profile?

i should know, im one of them! :D

I enjoyed this story a lot more than i thought I would, honestly. There are some points where Naruto seems like he has some common sense, and I love it. Sasuke and Naruto with PMS was amusing. ANd the end was awesome. There are too many funny lines to mention.
Great job!

hey i loved this story when i read the title i didn't think iwould like it much but as i read it got better and better. Your a great author i love the pairings:naruto and hinata, sasuke and sakura. my favorite part was when sasuke punched kiba and you in order branch, branch, branch, tree, branch, branch, squirrel, branch, kakashi with a video camera, branch branch, lake, fish, fish, water, water, lake bottom! i laughed so much when i read it, i also like the anel no jutsu that kakashi did on naruto. keep up the awesome job!

Your story is very funny and i enjoy reading it

Dude, you're bloody hilarious. Bit of a silly story, but you wrote it very well. Well done!

Oh man, this was awesome. I was cracking up the whole time. Especially the parts that involved Shino. Great story, and I hope you end up writing the second one that you mentioned in your notes. I'd like to see how Naruto deals with extra attention. That and Naruto being a suave, sweet talking gentleman seems like an amusing read. :D

Oh! This was a really good story! Great twists. . . sigh. angel no justu. Now THAT is something a girl could use . . . all around awsome

This has got to be my favorite spinoff of Naruto ever. Quite literally. I'll admit that you had a few (very few) errors, but you did a very good job on the overall story...and honestly, I could see this taking the prize as another Naruto movie. Your writing continues to impress me! I look forward to reading more of your wok in the future.

~Fenix

this was a great story. very funny, with load of interesting surprises.

love the way hinata and naruto got together.
not a single complaint to give. the shino thing made me laugh more than anything :D

it was hard to not bust a gut as i read this. kudos to you for the great fic ^w^

Amazingly done. This was a really amusing read. :)

Excellent story. I don't really like childish stories like this, but this defiantly was a very good story. The idea was very original had kept me laughing. Good job! Please continue writing, i would love to read more of your work