Nice mix of characters, and I like their interactions. At least it'd be fairly easy for Stryker to find his way back to Earth - if he picks up his memories.

Well the team is going to be mad as they find out that Stryker is with the Tok'ra.

Can't wait for more, please try to post more of this story as soon as you are able to

-Is Stryker really blind, if was, will he get better?

-Why not have Buffy also get help from Angel, Spike could get on Sonya's nerves by reminding her of Kano wil the way he talks?

Please send a review reply about these two questions

Was it me or was this chapter a bit shorter then normal? Anyways it was still good although I do have to wonder where Stryker went to, I'm not sure what he was fighting though. Kind of sounded familiar but with so little detail it's hard to get a decent picture.

So that's Hanbi huh? Kind of expected more from him, you know bigger, meaner nastier from all the build up. Kind of a let down really. Oh well I'm sure you got him backing with lots of power anyway to make up for that.

PLEASE tell me that Stryker and Kitana were just going as friends. Having them as lover interest is not only totally out of character but there has never been any romance at all between them in any formate.

I think that last scene was pretty cool with those people starting to get to know one another. I never knew Nightwolf was into tech, where did you get that information?

What's DOTR? I hate it when people use those and expect everyone to know what it means. Anyways I agree Tera was the better girlfriend and the other girl was just a bit too young and not really Willow's type.

Although I have no idea what JD/S or J/S you were talking about. Personally I prefer Sonja with Cage anything else doesn't really fit and how come he wasn't in this chapter? He's one of my favorites.

Oh and Teal'c is a Star Wars fan not a Star Trek one. The ice cream I can see from that epsiode when he and Jonas were digging into them on the Prometheus, lol.

Anyways it was a cool fight although I had a hard time picturing what they were fighting against from the descriptions. Maybe if you could clean it up a bit or something in another chapter.

Well that was an interesting start, I liked how you worked all three higher class of beings into this. Plus I really liked how Rayden (i keep expecting it to be spelled Raiden but I know they changed it) and Whistler.

That was really fun to read.

BEST LINES I'VE READ SINCE SPIKED DRINKS!

very minor point -how in the world did a couple of guards manage to 'grab Faith and hold her back' while the blood sample was taken? If the common guards are THAT tough, what chance does a rescue party have? Or was she afraid to start a fight, fearing Dawn would get killed in the ruckus?
* Shouldn't Jack call in some reinforcements? Or more supplies? I assume they've got a staff weapon for Teal'c, everybody has those zat-thingies... any chanc of getting a 302... or one of those ships with the ring-transporters? might be fun to fly through a portal with some serious firepower and transport capability...

Can't wait to read more, please post your next chapter as soon as you are able to

-Any chance the Asgard/Thor will help get them out?Please send a review reply

So far so good, show us what else you can come uyp with, please post your next chapter as soon as you are able to

I think the flow goes smoothly in this story.

Asgards? Thor?

I don't like your decision to depower the Slayers. The Scoobies gave them power, led them and then threw them away when they got tired of dealing with them. It makes me hope some of them go out, find a way to get powers, and pay the Scoobies a visit.

Hi there!

I like your story. It looks fun. But your choice of big bad is way off!

You got the name of the norse god wrong. It is Balder, not Baldur. But you got it right about him being the norse god of light and peace.

Balder would never do such atrocities as Rayden told of. He couldn't. Balder didn't have a destructive hair on his body. He was the personification of all things good and friendly.

Well, unless you purposefully wrote Baldur, as in not the norse god, and made Daniel missunderstand, and unintentionally misslead the rest of the group. That could be interesting.

Anyway, keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Best of wishes from Norway
Paladin Steelbreaker