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Reviews For: Firelight

Neonlights 2007-02-18 ch 4,	abuseLove it! youre going really well! I want you to update!@ you haven updated in ages! Please! Poor Eirkia! Porr everyone! I hope Eirika kills Valter!
Naomi O'Neill 2006-06-23 ch 4, anon.	abuseI find it hard to find a good setheirika fic this one is awesome! keep going!
Silver Harmony 2006-03-03 ch 4,	abuseThis is the first FE:SS fanfic I've read, and I must say, I'm rather impressed. There are so many characters to deal with, and to make it work, and you've acheived this very well. The characterisation is also perfect, and the dialogue amusing to read. Love the story so far, and waiting for the next ;) Great work!
Omniflyer 2006-02-23 ch 4,	abuse...we have places reserved for people like you, y'know. People who revel in cliffhangers of the most evil degree. There are places for you. XD Ah, what do I say that I haven't already? Wonderful plot, remarkably in-character both in dialogue and movement and overall enjoyable. More! ^^
Arabella Silverbell 2006-02-22 ch 4,	abuseI recently got into FE:SS, and I'm really glad that there's great fanfiction like this. I can't wait until the next chapter!
ManaMage 2006-02-22 ch 1,	abuseLooking good. I look forward to more. -Sorry for the short review...kinda tired.
leradny 2006-02-09 ch 3,	abuseAt first it started out well--I liked the banter between the trainees. But then when you got to the village, I kept waiting for Joshua to pop the heck up from behind Ephraim, yet he DIDN'T. In fact, Joshua didn't pop up at all! That was the only thing wrong with this chapter, but a VERY large thing. First off, I noticed he never spoke up when that village turned them away--it was all Innes or L'Arachel. "Well, we have a redheaded swordsman who looks uncannily like Prince Joshua would after ten years--with the Sacred Twin of Jehanna to boot!" Cue Joshua with Audhulma. And Joshua's in a later bit talking to L'Arachel--so he wasn't left behind or anything. From the last chapter, I know he could walk perfectly well, so he wasn't in the convoy unable to stand. I just didn't understand why Joshua would not be happy to pull rank (or Audhulma) after being turned away by a stupid villager who would only listen to the last remaining member of the Jehannan royal line, WHICH HE HAPPENS TO BE. That was one VERY rough spot in an otherwise perfectly enjoyable chapter. Please explain it more clearly and I'll be happy to read more.
Omniflyer 2006-02-09 ch 3,	abuse...BIT of a cliffhanger? Now I know why you wanted to get this out so early... But I'm happy you did, anyway. ^^ Your ability to write so many characters without making them seem OOC is astonishing. I remain impressed by it. Although... I am a little scared about Eirika trying something on her own in her present state... be nice to her, eh? No errors, or anything, either. Except for the one where you thought I was cool. :P Something's up with that. I patiently await Chapter 4. ^^
Omniflyer 2006-02-02 ch 2,	abuseHere comes the obligatory rave. Ready? MARISA! w00ts! ^^; Okay, I think that's over. You have nailed characters. This much we know. See, there's a bunch of other comments I'd usually make if you were a n00b author. Great plot, good development, wonderful dialogue, superb character relations. But you're not a n00b author and so I don't really need to say all that since you don't need to work much more on developing those aspects of your skill. ...but, if only for the heck of it, great plot, good development, wonderful dialogue and superb character relations. :P Okay, you posted chapter 2 early for Griff. Can you post chapter 3 early for me? ^^
Axel Wildfire 2006-02-01 ch 2, anon.	abuseNice. you've got the characters downpat, perfect grammar and spelling, and you've obviously owned the game multiple times. Nice, nice, and again, nice.
Omniflyer 2006-01-31 ch 1,	abuseI'm quite shocked at just how accurately you're portraying close to half the cast, probably more, of playable characters and familiar enemies. They really feel like the game, and I think you've hit personalities and relations between them dead-on, not to mention a strong sense of dramatic flair, to boot. ^^ Pat yourself on the back, Vil. You've taken a series that has the potential to be a fanfiction writer's nightmare and make it cohesive, intelligible, true to the basis and interesting. Good stuff.
leradny 2006-01-31 ch 2,	abuseI enjoyed the humour in the second chapter, like in this segment: "They call you Gilliam the Silent, you know," Forde attempted. Gilliam turned to look at him. "M." "...And I can see why. At least you live up to your title." - But other than the capturing of Eirika, I have to repeat what Lemurian Girl said--it's pretty much nothing that hasn't been done before. Just very well written. You're good right now, but that won't stop you from getting even better in later chapters, so I'll keep an eye on this one.
Lemurian-Girl 2006-01-29 ch 1,	abuseIt's ok. The detail is good, and the writing is nice, but the plot is nothing that hasn't already been done before. I'll look out for the next chapter and see if it improves. I'll add it to my C2 once there is some more Seth/Eirika interaction. ~Lemurian-Girl~
canihasficburger 2006-01-25 ch 1,	abuseWell, you totally, definitely have beaten Chapter 14 on Eirika's Route.

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