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Reviews For: The Follow Through

merissala
2007-01-01
ch 1,
abusecool. i just knew that line was a good one. (making any sense am I?) oh well. :D
Cydarill
2006-12-30
ch 1,
abuseI love the interaction, quiet and understated but so very believable. So sweet, and the tension and uncertainty is very well-written. Go Silver Pair!
atama ga itai
2006-01-26
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully written. I like the turn you've added, the tennis metaphor. I'm adding you to my watched author list!
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