Aw... -wipes tear- that was cute. Damn, i just said cute. excuse me -hits himself- ok. it was good, but kinda short, i think it could be a really good one if u added a lil' more

sweet

Kawaii kawaii kawaii kawaii kawaii

*ayumi*

This is really good. You shou8ld write more T/R fics.

*kawaii*

*AYUMI*

Awww...that story was very sweet!

I loved your story so much i put it on my favorites list it was short and sweet you are a fantastic writer.

short and sweet :)

Awwwwwww! -

I personally thought that this fic was one of the sweetest little thing I've ever read! Good job!

i have that movie! tenchi so loves ryoko cuz he was drawing pics of her non stop even when he didnt remember her and he remembered her name, not ayeka's! i hate haruna, though. nice fic

its amazeing,your wrighting skill's are good but your atory is way to way to ,if you were to say put just a little plot into it, and tell them why they love each other,you would be a hell of alot better,even thought your good now,keep up th ework and try to write a little bit more ok

Hey, cute story, i liked it!