A wonderful expansion of the scene! Thank you!

he! it made me feel so proud, having so much to do with this. k, g2g. bye!

Hurrah! Whee...I think your writing has definately improved. Well, not improved, but changed for the better? I dunno. I really liked this story, although, unfortunately, it ne did pas make me cry at all. *heh* I liked Esther's betaing, and I contributed one half of a sentence! Whoo! I had other ideas, but Esther didn't like any, so why bother.

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Yay, best oneshot EVER!

Now, just write something of that magnitude for...Dumbledore's death! Yes! Or about Sirius' death. Whee. I loved it, woot.