I liked the color theme... I read your work on and followed you to here... I liked the color theme, it seemed to work. I liked how the woman viewed Olivia as patronizing, and seeing the ?pleasure? they seem to bring each other in bantering and what not... the story line was all pretty good. i like the jade/silver thing, and especially the running thing. i want to know what happened- sad that you havn't continued this one...

I STILL LOVE IT! I'm glad you put the flashback in there-gives more information about the characters.

How did I miss this story? This is fantastic. I just love that it is told from Rosangela's perspective. Usually, we learn everything about the victim from the Detective's investigation, but this is a refreshing new take.

I'm putting it on my alert list.

Wow! great update!

EO!

onetreefan

Did you know they put a letter limit on anonymous reviews' names? Hm. . .

Anyways, me thrilled. I know her idea about running, except I do it with rollerblading.

Just to let you know, the link didn't show up. I don't think it's allowed to put links on stories.

finally you updated! :) Awesome :)

OMG...you cannot just leave me hanging like this! I totally love this story. I love how the poem in the beginning with the colors ties into the story...how shique! Great job, keep going!

Yay! You're back and it was amazing as usual. Geez, I hope no one pestered you about updating it...:smiles innocently: sigh, if only mine were this good...ooh, check out my latest one, What Happened Next, I think you'll really like it.

Bravo! I've been waiting for an update on this amazing story! It's so interesting to have a victims point of view instead of the normal way, that's what makes this story so great!

Oh but I should mention to you that links won't show up like the one you tried to put at the end of this chapter. They don't show up in PM's either.

I hope that you can update soon. Maybe you can e-mail me the thing to your other story? My e-mail is in my profile. Thank you! :)

-Kay

This is so good! please PLEASE update this! this is absolutely great!

lovelovelove it :)

OMG...no I gotta spell it out...OH MY GOD

You are a genius! I love it...I love it! Wow...I can't put into words how good this is...:sigh: if only mine were this good (but you didn't hear that ;)

I like the sweetness of the chapter (with Karma). So we know now "who" the mystery father is. . .I say "who" because we don't really know him yet. We just know that it's not Chris or Luke. Hm. . .

This story gets more and more interesting as it goes on :) Keep up the good work!

-Kay

Oh. This is getting really good. Please update soon!