*bursts out laughing* heaven has its hands full now, doesn't it? ;D

well, it starts as a tragedy, but it ends as a comedy. *shrugs* enjoyable, to say the least,
brittney

OKAY!
I'm sorry but I could hardly read that it was to painfull!

That was really good! It's got the right amount of confusion and ethereal descriptiveness to it. I loved it!

The ending quote was well-picked! The whole ending in itself was superb. It's a very fitting end for Artemis Fowl.

I applaud your writing, and I hope you keep it up!

I liked it, though it's a bit sad y'know that Artemis and Butler die...

Very lovely. You have a talent to twist a character's personality with a good reason, and that's something certainly very difficult to do. Again, there are a few typos and lack of spaces between words (it took me a while to figure out what 'washewho' was), but above that, excellent work.

>“Let God be warned…” he whispered with the tiniest hint of smugness, “Artemis Fowl is on his way.”

That was a lovely line - a little sad but still funny. The whole fic was bittersweet... I liked it.

Squee! This is good, your best, IMO. It has a very contented, languid air to it, unhurried, etc. Me likey.

I saw two typos, but I didn't notice them until I looked for typos, so they aren't bad. One was 'area' - 'are', and the other one I already forgot.

It bugged me a touch how you explained the obvious here and there - there were a few things that seemed to me that should be left unsaid. Ex: "Butler was reversing aspects of a lifelong association in just a few short minutes." I dunno; personal preference. Of course, in my stories perhaps too much goes unsaid and then people are Confused. So.

Well, good work! Wish you much luck in Crim challenge!