Wow. Powerful, saddening, deep...There are lots of words to describe this but I'll just sum it up with one: Awesome. You nailed Obi-Wan perfectly, his every thought was probably just what was actually running through his poor, distressed mind during that horrible, horrible(and did I mention horrible?!) fight. Keep up the good work!

Good job!

Favs for story and author... ROCK ON!

OMG...how sad was that? it was good though...i really get a kick out of reading people's poetry every once in a while.