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Reviews for: Pentacle Path
Dustbunny3 2/6/06 . chapter 1
Very nice. I liked the second bit a lot. Why did you break it into drabbles, though? Just for the challenge? Ah, well, this is really well-done anyway. I hardly even noticed the lack of length, you write it so well.

A favor please: May I put this story in my C2?
PharaonicWolf 1/27/06 . chapter 1
Aww, cute. Yugi is just SO cute in your fics... and Ryou too. I adore him. I wish this was a little bit longer though... Some of the scenes could be fleshed out a little, like the whole Ryou/Anzu/goodbye dinner thing. Or maybe I'm just saying that because there's no such thing as too much Ryou...
Naive Goth 1/27/06 . chapter 1
Le cool. Was that Joey at Kaiba's? Or... erm... ack.. brain, dead.. barm..
Towaraito no Mado 1/26/06 . chapter 1
Oh wow... Very fluffy and poignant... well, more humourous actually _
Yimi Makuya 1/26/06 . chapter 1
great chpater! are you putting another up? i hope you are! This is a great start for a wonderful story!
MyAibou 1/26/06 . chapter 1
I especially like #1 and #2. YES, that's exactly how Yugi would respond. Devastated, but wanting to be happy for her.

Honda and Jou... ::snicker:: Very nice.

I like the description of a NY studio apt. in #5, too. Feels right.
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