 Dustbunny3 2/6/06 . chapter 1Very nice. I liked the second bit a lot. Why did you break it into drabbles, though? Just for the challenge? Ah, well, this is really well-done anyway. I hardly even noticed the lack of length, you write it so well.
A favor please: May I put this story in my C2? |
 PharaonicWolf 1/27/06 . chapter 1Aww, cute. Yugi is just SO cute in your fics... and Ryou too. I adore him. I wish this was a little bit longer though... Some of the scenes could be fleshed out a little, like the whole Ryou/Anzu/goodbye dinner thing. Or maybe I'm just saying that because there's no such thing as too much Ryou... |
 Naive Goth 1/27/06 . chapter 1Le cool. Was that Joey at Kaiba's? Or... erm... ack.. brain, dead.. barm.. |
 Towaraito no Mado 1/26/06 . chapter 1Oh wow... Very fluffy and poignant... well, more humourous actually _ |
 Yimi Makuya 1/26/06 . chapter 1great chpater! are you putting another up? i hope you are! This is a great start for a wonderful story! |
 MyAibou 1/26/06 . chapter 1I especially like #1 and #2. YES, that's exactly how Yugi would respond. Devastated, but wanting to be happy for her.
Honda and Jou... ::snicker:: Very nice.
I like the description of a NY studio apt. in #5, too. Feels right. |