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beldarath69
2009-11-09 . chapter 39
Just finnished your story. Have to admit that there are only so many ways to say that this was excellent, awsome, etc... Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Dpotter
2009-11-06 . chapter 25
a robin...a Robin... a ROBIN!...of all the blasted things you could have come up with...and i really liked your story...but this is so depressing i don't want to read anymore...shame on you!
pat6121
2009-11-03 . chapter 15
To hold DE DE+trafrom to animal+zoo=jail.
Ginnylove9990
2009-10-29 . chapter 39
This is an awesome story. You will get no flames from me. I enjoied every word of it. I loved it when you made Harry into a Robin. You did an awesome job on this story. And you are an awesome writer.
Reader
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
One of the best story that I had read. I agree with your views on the story. Please continue to write more stories. Thanks
pat6121@aol.com
2009-10-27 . chapter 10
If harry gone to buy them a new, better house, he should own 4# Privet Dr. and have sold as fast as he can! A very good story I am enjoy a lot!
TouGod
2009-10-26 . chapter 25
-_-!


A robin? A bleeding robin? That's what you came up with? Were you high when you wrote that part?
Salamander Hanzo
2009-10-25 . chapter 39
nice
buznuz1
2009-10-25 . chapter 39
this is absoulutely beautiful. I literlly started crying when i read the last lines. It is such an amazing story filled with twists and turns and humour and sadness but it is beautiful, absoultely breathtaking. I am amazed by the fact that i finished this in one weekend (consideing its length) and then realised it was because i didn't do any of my homework. Thank you for finally writing a story in which harry is a realistic character, Dumbldore doesn't just become evil for the sake of it and one that finally mention inter-species magical realations! I especially loved the part about Neville and Lunas Fairy triplets and Hermione and Harry's normal children, could u maybe consider writing a story about them?? thank you so much for writing this i am indebted and would it be ok if i mentioed this in my profile? (as the best and my favourite hp fanfic ever!?)
-Chitsiez-
2009-10-23 . chapter 39
OMG
I have to say thank you for writing this fic. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You have a great talent for writing, and I was drawn into the story from the first chapter. Thank you so much for writing my new favourite fic. :-)
MercurialMind
2009-10-11 . chapter 39
This was an amazing story, I read everything in one go. I liked so many things about this story: the idea of Harry being adopted by a goblin, your interpretation of magical beings, the main pairings which happen to be among my favourites, the fact that many antagonists got a chance to be redeemed [I agree that no one is truly evil], your portrayal of the Founders, also that you didn't choose to have Luna's creatures be a figment of her imagination conjured up in an effort to separate her from reality or something like that, but that they are real - I prefer that version... and, well, if I wanted to write everything down it would be quite a long list. So I'll stop now, but really, I enjoyed your story immensely and I would never complain about 'lack of conflict' - this is what made this story unique, it was more about the maturing and individual development of the main characters and too much drama wasn't really needed.
Arkenstone007
2009-10-10 . chapter 29
Actually it is listed in Cannon that it is the mermish spoken language. (I think Percy mentions Barty Crouch Sr being able to speak it.) Also it says Albus speaks with the merpeople making the same screeching noises as the egg after Harry is brought out of the water. He says that the chief told him about Harry being the first to arrive and stay with the hostages. We also hear them "singing" as Harry nears the village.

It would make sense that the lake was actually back in time as the founders' time was 10 years before (AD 995)
not only 200, which would be 1795. It would make more sense if it was the 10 years before as then she would still be in the founders' time and would make Marvin's comment about "living hundreds of summers" a better description than only 200 years.
Athenodora Moon
2009-10-10 . chapter 26
If i was an animagus i'd probably be a wolf or a type of cat.
I dand do a few cat stuff. i also like to curl up by something warm. Wolf well i'm over protective and a bit of a loner. And wolves are sometimes the loner types.
loretta537
2009-10-06 . chapter 39
this was a great story
Jaymee1000
2009-10-06 . chapter 39
I loved that story. This is not the first time I have been through it but I think it is the first time that I have left a review. I will be adding it my favorites and will probably read it again in the future.
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