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| Lientjuhh 2008-09-05 ch 39, | abuseI liked it... Well done... ;) |
| forsaken angel of doom 2008-09-02 ch 39, | abusethat was a beautiful way for tippy to die and i loved ur story but i still cant get over harry as a robin lol i have read many many many stories and not one was harry anything but a powerful sometimes magical creature its refreashing to read one where he is a every day normal animal even if it is laughable lol |
| ShadowDog34 2008-08-31 ch 39, | abuseI have read many fanfictions and this one is one of the most captivating story. There was times when i almost cried, where i laughed and where i felt anger at dumbledore and other people. there are very few fanficitons out there that will make you feel so many different emotions throughout the story. it was amazing. i absolutely loved it! |
| Suiyou 2008-08-27 ch 39, | abuseI just finished this story. Great work. I really enjoyed your Harry. |
| keichan2 2008-08-27 ch 39, | abuseI liked this story. There were some good little mysteries (I think there must not have been much readers that guessed why Albus was griping his forearm..., I'm pretty certain nobody guessed what Harry's animagus form would be,...), but on the other hand, some were not answered, and I'm sad about this (who was the Filch's cat? I had a guess on Trelawney, because someone asked where she was during the battle, but she was not noted as missing afterward, so I guess it was not her...). Also, I'm happy to see that you didn't consider being "caned" a punishment! But I'm sad that you excused all that were bad to Harry: I feel that at least one should have been without Albus influence (not counting Draco...). |
| The One Who Wishes To Be Lo... 2008-08-27 ch 39, | abuseI LOVED THIS STORY... AND I ASK 1 THING... PLEASE UPDATE "The Hardest Riddle" |
| The One Who Wishes To Be Lo... 2008-08-27 ch 25, | abuseThe bird peeping back at him was a robin. *quote* that is hilarious |
| Loopy Looney Charny 2008-08-25 ch 39, | abuseheyy...this was a brilliant story! i had tears in mi eyes for sum of it! suked in to dumbledore! |
| DragonFire Princess 2008-08-19 ch 39, | abuseLove the story, Hope you update ASAP! |
| Dark Goddess of Fiery Tempe... 2008-08-17 ch 39, | abuseI really liked this. Only thing I noticed was that you spelt Blaise's last name "Zambini", when it's "Zabini". Just thought I'd point it out, but heaps of people make that mistake. |
| Slick101 2008-08-16 ch 39, | abusegreat story and loved reading so keep doing your thing and post again. |
| gms 2008-08-15 ch 14, | abusewell as i mentioned in a previous review u have explained pretty well the evil BIG D and ron and ginny as of now the story is beautifully progressing and enticing (as for ur story being similar to many others - either i havent read that many or havent found that many about manipulative D) neways good one keep it up |
| gms 2008-08-14 ch 3, | abusebloody hell! JESUS H CHRIST man ...you completely changed the foundations of this world. i have reading fanfics for some time now and with a lot of variations but this beats them all by leaps and bounds beyond measure...dumbledore is the villian (not with voldemort but for harry) and ron is bad, unbelievable . i can digest the fact that dumbledore is bad but ron ...never man. i havent yet read beyond chp3 but breaking the trinity - the golden trio is sacred man (i m sure u can justify it later in the story but it is simply not done ) the golden trio was simply not made for breakup even in stories where harry is adopted by snape along with draco (making them brothers) the trio was never evil nor broken. neways its has been a long review , will continue with the story. will write reviews later |
| DarkEros07 2008-08-11 ch 39, | abuseI really enjoyed this fic. It made me smile, laugh, almost cry. So all around it was great! I didn't really find any big problems with it. I enjoyed it and must say I like Fannon better then Cannon so your all good in my eyes. And I really don't like dumbledork at the moment so its all good and I REALLY don't like JK at the moment either her last 2 books were a laugh. They completely sucked. I mean really who kills off his pet? AND Dobby? I mean come on! anyways. Great story! -Kristen- |
| InuFan3545 2008-08-09 ch 39, | abuseJust wanted to take a moment to comment on your story. I loved the story overall, and you had me rolling in the floor laughing about Luna's pranking. She would have made a fine Maruader! Parts of me felt like everything went too smoothly for Harry, but other parts of me said that Harry obviously suffered enough already. I feel like yours is a believable Harry/Hermione story, with no 'instant intimacy' line. Also loved Harry's Animagus form, but part of me was waiting to hear that Neville's was a tortoise, since Hufflepuff is supposed to be patient and hardworking. Anyways, thank you for an enjoyable read, and I hope to hear more out of you in the future. Inu |