Wow yeah I thought it was Warrick also but turns out it wasn't I think. Yeah I'm with everybody on this: Will you please continue this its really good...Pretty, Pretty Please with sugar on top!

Still staring... and things are starting to get a bit blurry

I'm gonna sit here staring at the screen until the chapters number turns to 2 and because no one in my family has glasses please let that be soon

I know it's been a while since this was published, but are you still considering going on? I would sincerely enjo... oh heck, forget pride! *Throws self at feet* Please, please, please, PRETTY PLEASE! I love outside character POVs and there is just not enough! *Tries to regain composure* I mean... I wouldn't object at all if you decided to carry on. :P

LOL! I love this character's POV! It's awesome... please write more! damn the critics! it's a good story and I hope to read more of it soon!

plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon i want know what happens next!

I think you should continue...there are enough cliff-hangers already.

Oh, please continue. I like it.

Please continue! I'm interested now so I hope it's TBC!

great start, please continue!

interested, please continue...

this is awesome! PLEASE make it a TBC!

You've got my interest... I do hope you continue. At first I thought it was one of our CSI's who broke their hand, you mentioned married, so I thought Warick, but guess I am wrong... Waiting for next chapters...