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Hello you sweet sweet thing, this is your girlfriend talking...duh...love the story, keep it going. I am starting to work on a story since you told me to come here...anyhoo...here ya go, i wanna read more! I LOVE YOU! Good job! -

Damn good work! What else has poor Conor to endure? Waiting for more!

Fantastic work... a great way of telling and describing details... You really get caught up in the story... Keep going! I wanna read more!