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| thisyearslove 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abusePlease tell me you'll write another, follow-up story!! |
| Elainhe 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseSO beautifull. Loved it. Well written, like the second person approach! |
| passionate csi 2006-01-29 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. You should do a sequel. |
| RLBB 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseaw, that's so sweet! I loved the ending ^.^ You should continue, it would make a really good story |
| JacobedRose 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abuseNice ending to the episode, I wasn't completely happy with how it ended either. |
| chili-peppers 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abuseah poor lindsay and then theres danny who saves the day lol i lovve this short but sweet ! well done ! your a good writer! |
| MedicWarrickLvr 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThat's a MUCH better ending! I love that! There's alot of room for more there Jen! ;-) Great work as always! |
| Adamsgirl 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseaw! Poor Lindsay. that was really good Tuesday! :D |
| A.Boleyn 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was SO damn good! It was so good, in fact, that I didn't want to finish reading it. I kept pausing and doing other stuff. LOL Writing in 2nd pers. made it really powerful. Now - if only that had TRULY happened! ;) |
| .candleburn. 2006-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was so good! I absolutely loved it, I'd love to read more. :) |