Wow, what an unexpected story you have here. What can I say to show that I'm now a fan of this story. I love it. Well, pretty love all ShizNat stories and this one, obviously, is one of the many.

I don't know if I missed this but was Arika H. a hime too or just Nina? I look forward to your story and hope you update soon. I hate reading story that I like and did not update, esp. when i favored the story, e.i like this story here. What I'm looking forward to most, honestly, is more ShizNat relationship. Lastly, please keep up with the chapter, I have this on my favor and alert list.

A good chapter.(I'm getting better at picturing which character was from 'Hime and 'Otome.) Nina is the most interersting one that I'm most curious to see how her story will go. Loved that part where she woke up in Youko's office. Will be waiting for your next update!

This fandom's awesome too.

The numerous characters are JUST a bit tricky to keep up with but other than that not bad in the least.

And Nao is underrated. That is all. :D

Glad to see that you got the next chapter out. Your story managed to grab my attention, which is saying something!

There are some spots that need work, but overall, its an interesting story. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Keep up the good work!

Hey, I like your fic.
It's a fresh plot and it seems like the whole MH/MO cast is getting some screen time. Yay!
Let Natsuki kick some ** and please don't hurt Ers and Aoi.

I keep wondering why this story is lacking reviews..
Well, another nice chapter!
Just wanted you to know that there actually are people following this story ;D

~niwa

ooh, nice action in this chapter. Keep it up! Just one thing is confusing me. Is the "Good Morning/Good Afternoon" part at the end a typo or on purpose?

Ahh! Great story! Update soon!!

I liked the light hearted mood in the early chapters. Nice job on adding My Otome scenes in the My Hime universe. For some reason,I think of your story slighty AU. Mashiro back as Chairman threw me off a bit since she had left god knows where and had left Fumi as the new Director in the original tv series. My Hime Natsuki as Council President? I always wondered how that happened? It was a bit hard for me to see her in that role without knwoing what lead to it considering what happened to her during the Festival. However, I can easily picture her as Prez if I think of MyOtome Natsuki. And a nice job in capturing Nao's personailty. She certainly the Nao I know from Hime and Otome. Looks like the story is picking up with the Orphan's appearance. I'm looking forward to see what you have in store for Ch 5.

This was interesting, but really really hard to follow...

Try breaking up your paragraphs properly. Each time a new person is speaking, there should be a new paragraph indentation. Look it up, if you're not sure what I mean.

Also, two years after the Carnival would make Mai, Natsuki, Chie, Aoi, and Nina having graduated - assuming they didn't fail a year, of course. You might want to put a flag on your summary specifically saying AU for HiME, since really it is.

It is, however, interesting. Please keep writing.

Wow! A very well thought out crosover between the two stories. Bravo! This story was so good, I regisrered for an account just to comment on it. The characterization is spot-on good, the description of the setting is good. A couple in-character fashbacks from the HiME point of view detailing the last two years would be add to the story, but isn't required.

One thought that crossed my mind... Childs and Orphens are simmilar, right? I've thought it would neat if Kagutsuchi ended up a bag guy the second time around. Don't change anthing if it isn't in your plot already; you have a good flow going so don't disrupt it. This is just the idle thoughts of an idle reader.

Keep up the good work! You've got my attention!

wingnut2292

Wow! It's all of my favorite characters wrapped up into one Mai Super Fic! Neat! At first I didn't know who Senoh was because I couldn't remember that that was Aoi's last name, but that's the only thing that caused my brain minor confusion. I'm interested to see where this fic can go and hope to see an update from you soon! Good work!