(wipes eyes) Holy-Elton-John's-MOTHER! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Update, UPDATE! This is so funny! I'd kiss you, but that would be incredibly gross and extremely awkward. Update! Update! Then I could read it and laugh some more and berate you until you update again. XD

-MFJ

This story DEFINITLY Bartimaeus Trilogy, which is my favorite

series of books! Noise(is that how you spell it?) even sounds like Bartimaeus

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

xD

I can't believe I didn't find this earlier!

FUNNY!

You need to update!

Cherry-sama

Very nice... I like it.

Yep. DEFINATELY Bartimaeus. Anyway, this is really funny and I hope you update soon.

Haha this is funny. It kinda reminds me of the Bartimaeus Trilogy. I'll make sure to read more soon

XD ahahah! Great, as usual. Now I want to eat Noishe. Don't ask why.

THIS IS HILARIOUS! I was thinking of doinga story like this! But you beat me to it!

I liked this chapter, too. It seems like a long time since I played ToS, so a lot of these jokes bring back the memories.

However, one thing seemed off. Why was Noishe laughing during the first entry of the chapter? When he tried to explain what was funny in the second entry, I couldn't tell that he found anything that happened funny.

Not that I didn't find it funny, though... Nice work!

Hey, don't worry so much about delays. These things happen to the best of us.

I guess it was as funny as before, but I still liked it :D. He's still calling Genis "Nerdy Girl" XD If he thinks Genis is a girl, than what will Noishe think of Zelos? XD I thought it was still done rather well

NO cry! You good! Just PLEASE UPDATE SOON BEFORE I DIE! It's SO funny!

At least you updated.

Zelos: You took FOREVER MAN!

*whacks Zelos with paper fan* Anyway, meh.

...Just keep on going!

Update!_

You've updated! What are you talking about 'lack of humour'? I thought it was funny. Does Noishe have a grudge against Genis or something?

(Insert McDonald's jingle here with very noncatchy-catchphrase)

That was supposed to mean "I'm lovin' it."

Well, I enjoyed it, even though I still can't figure out who- or what- Hair Gel is. I like "Nerd Girl." That's hilarious. Good work.

Lol. I liked this. Noishe has a... colorful... vocabulary for a mutant dog, to say the least. I actually wondered about that whole rabbit thing, too. It seems a lot of games have inserted evil rabbits as enemies ever since Monty Python's Holy Grail.

Well, I think you could have put those footnotes where the corresponding numbers are, like, in parentheses or something. Oh well.

Onto dah next chapter!