Reviews for The Right Choice

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light soceress 2007-06-10 ch 2,	abusethis is really interesting, i do hope you decide to continue cause this is a really good fic
blackwhiteraven 2006-07-15 ch 1,	abuseOh Yay! Oh, Call me Green. I'm gonna be reading a lot of your stories... Feel free to yell, scream, and basically try and get me off your back as much as is possible. XD Have fun, Green
blackwhiteraven 2006-07-15 ch 2,	abuseI love this story; It's a shame that you said it's prety much abandoned. I love it! Please continue?!?!?1 Keep it up, Green
Lady Eivel 2006-05-10 ch 2,	abuseYes- here in England, we do call it a torch. Great story- love to see more soon!
Doctor Madwoman 2006-03-03 ch 2,	abuseI like it, it looks deeper into how Ed has changed. Please continue.
A Amelia Black 2006-02-28 ch 2,	abusehm... well Very good description and very good dream sequence. I was confused at first if it was a dream.. A suggestion for dreams/flashbacks any of that sort, italics. That helps the readers get it in their mind that it's not happening in real time. The only teeny thing I'd have to nudge about is Ed's attitude lol. Edmund is definitely my favourite character and, well...I don't know, it just doesn't seem like he'd hate all his siblings now. He changed a lot by the battle and if you're doing movie verse, you could see how happy he was. He was changed. But, hey, it always makes for an interesting story to do a twist in character Good job so far Cheers Amelia
viennacantabile 2006-02-28 ch 2,	abuseoh, wow. the dream sequence was incredible. can't wait to see where this goes. :D
steelelf 2006-02-28 ch 2,	abuseHere's another semi-reliable source. Yep- torch. Thanks for the new chapter, way cool! (that snake wouldn't be the green witch- would it?) In italian, non tempre est was something like (don't go east) And latin, which I assume it is, I don't know...
EllaJ.W 2006-02-28 ch 2,	abusethat was a haunting dream, and i loved edmund talking to the snake. heehee cute. i can't wait to see the pevensies' reactions when they finally track edmund down. they'll never let him out of their sight again! something to look forward to! i am so thrilled you decided to continue this story! and i have a nasty habit of leaving stories for months and even years without updates, so waiting a few weeks is just a minor blemish, and i dont mind. hope to see more!
coymelody 2006-02-28 ch 2,	abuseGreat story! Yay for Edmund! Waiting for more!
TimeMage0955 2006-02-28 ch 2,	abuseFINALLY! Yay, you posted! I have been waiting for this for so long! I liked the dream sequence and how you had 'Lucy'in it. Lucy, yeah right, that was no Lucy! Die Jadis! Anyway, update SOON! BYE!
Dee Lee 2006-02-27 ch 2,	abuseCute! Write more soon! I love Edmund!
Capegio 2006-02-27 ch 2,	abuseCute snake! Freaky dream! Angsty Edmund! His siblings had better get around to stopping him soon, 'cause I really don't want poor Ed to leave Narnia. The dream was rather frightening; I didn't realize it was a dream (I thought I'd just forgotten what happened in the last chapter) until the really surreal stuff started happening. For a moment I thought he had dreamt the whole thing and was still in Cair Paravel, and Lucy had found him while he was still half-dreaming. But this is still quite nice. I can hardly wait for more. And sibling fluff. Because every Narnia fic needs sibling fluff. I think it's part of the definition.
XJediRangerX 2006-02-23 ch 1,	abuseYou have no idea how amazed I was when I read this. You've done an awesome first chapter. If you don't keep posting I'll continue the story myself!
Boleyn 2006-02-16 ch 1,	abusethis chap is very good, nice idea, please continue with it.

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