 papersoul 2006-04-13 . chapter 1Ahh! Poor Remy! You don't need to add any more, personally I'm glad with the whole not knowing. If you added more thee would be a big stink about redemption and comeuppance... blah blah blah
Cool idea, the red-eyed becoming prey, lol. |
 Nicole Wagner 2006-02-04 . chapter 1Wow... This was just brilliant, so orginal. What can I say but... wow! Thought I would have loved to have known what happened to Remy? Is he an empty husk, is he dead, or does he have something left inside of him? Does anyone find him, does anyone care? *laughs nervously* Yeah... if you do continue or make a sequel to this wonderful work of art, I would love to see that.
Regards,
Nicole Wagner: The Daedly Gambit |
 Snickle-Gigger 2006-01-29 . chapter 1Ack! Remy! o.0
Hehe...I did enjoy this, though. The OCs pretty cool--she even dresses like me except for the fact that my clothing isn't so...ah...revealing. Yeah, that's me--a modest freak. XD.
I do think that this story *could* be taken further, but also just by leaving it where it is it leaves more to the reader's imagination so...50/50, really.
Excellent job! |
 GothikStrawberry 2006-01-29 . chapter 1 To lazy to login to day... but I still liked to tell you that this fic is really good and if you decide to continue I will read it. :) |
 Brazos 2006-01-28 . chapter 1 Please continue |
 Brimseye 2006-01-28 . chapter 1oh that was good! :) hehe silly remy! Personaly i think you left the story off at just the right place. If you kept it going it would get all revengy with wolvie going after her or something like that. hehehe perfect the way it is. Very good! |
 laenamoradadeROGUE 2006-01-27 . chapter 1this is so good! i was a bit confused at the begining, but it was intense. the idea that she has been preying for centuries is amazing and i already fell in love with it, i hope you do take it further, either the next victim or what would've if he survived. not having names gives it a great more suspense, but i think i can guess who each one is. i love it! great job! |
 BlkDiamond 2006-01-27 . chapter 1Different. Enjoyed the change. |
 *S* 2006-01-27 . chapter 1 Lol I loved this. A vampiress who can take down Gambit is definately my kind of character. I'd adore seeing you take this further.
S |
 Truest Tears 2006-01-27 . chapter 1well, that was a bit evil of you, if you don't mind me saying so...
I think Gambit should live...
somehow.
-Truest Tears- |
 Shorty McGee 2006-01-27 . chapter 1Thank you. I hope that it does not end like that! My hope is that you elaborate a little more.
Keep Writing, Shorty McGee |