Great story XDD

Most of all th Sensational story at sheppard have to be able to telekinetic talent^_^

Now I expect the continuation Please Don't forget it :( is my favorite

That you will have glided Ba'al for sheppard

Himself that a fic is of last year but I hope that you consider him and write the consequence

Forgive my bad English :)

ooh, very interesting. Great story

Great fic! Well balanced with whumpalicious Sheppard, snarky McKay, angsted Beckett, and worried Weir.

I had so many favorite parts I can't write them down, just know that I loved the entire fic.

Thanks for sharing this with me.

Wow what an interesting story! I am certainly glad I found it as I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for writing it as this one was very original.

Oh lol, some very funny lines in there, some of my favs are:

>“What do you think is going to happen? I’ll find some alien prom and dump pig’s blood on everyone?” The look on the physician’s face was priceless. “Never mind. Lousy movie.”<


>“And? What did those incompetents tell you?”
“Dr. Z. said something very fast and evil-sounding. Then he hung up on me.”<


>The physician rolled his eyes. “I think you and Ronon have watched Star Wars too many times.”
John shrugged. “He wanted to know why we called him ‘Chewie.’ What else was I supposed to do?”<


Great story :)

What a great ending. I'm glad there's going to be a sequel, looking forward to it already.

Oh! Too many great things about this chapter to list, the whole Afghanistan thing was very good. So, a sequel, eh? That would be great! Nothing like a bit of super power and espionage to make a story! Thanks for another great read :D

Woah. Stunning stuff. This chapter left me stunned too! Great work.

Cool! Yeah, John, better not kill him. Ek. Such good drama!

You're making a real nice job of Torrell, I'd forgotten how good this fic is! Great little aside to Lorne by Torrell, there, LOL!

As you know of the goa'uld you know what powers we have, so i would sugguest you write that sequel soon er rather than later! And it better be as good as th efirst story.

the jollygoauld

oh! I look forward to more :D A great story!

You are pure evil. This is a really great story. So not the ending I was expecting. Can't wait for the sequal.

I loved this story and I'm so glad that you havn't gotton rid of Sheppard's powers at the end of the story, I was so worried that you would. I can't wait for the sequel.

Oh! I can't wait for the swquel! There better be loads of whump ;)

This was a great story *rereads*