ugh poor ron:( marcus is a jerk

WOAH!

Hah! I can see that happening... but only cause I don't like Ron all that much...

you've got some really cool stories coming on

well done

This is very creepy. Nice bit of speculation on the Weasley's past. I liked the mention of Marcus thinking the Malfoys, as follower of a "half-blood lunatic" were beneath him. The irony is that he shows himself to be no better than they are, and quite possibly worse.

Again, I liked this. You create such dark, compelling characters, I would love to see this as a multi chapter fic. Maybe with him bringing down the Patils, and maybe a few more. It'd be interesting.