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Reviews for: Slytherin Sins: Envy
Ski000Girl
2006-12-02 . chapter 1
what a witch and not magical witch but horrible person witch she is.
The Sacred Feminine
2006-06-05 . chapter 1
**... Well that pretty much sucks for them doesn't it? Yes, Millie is far to ignored too. You did good here :)
x5x Nikki x5x
2006-01-28 . chapter 1
Sorry, i reviewed on your other series and missed the part about the Seven Deadly Sins... yeah, so sorry for being rude... yeah... still doing and excellent job!
will-smith101
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
wow...that was not something i expected...a memory charm on hermione? But wouldnt Milicent be too stupid to preform a complex memory charm?
LuciousLadyLucius
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
WOW THIS IS REALLY COOL i LOVE HOW YOU HAVE WRITTEN THIS

ARE YOU DOING 7 CHAPTERS EACH ONE OF THE SINS?

KEEP IT UP
Nathonea
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
This is sorta similar to one of my stories, strange. But except mine doesn't have the revenge part.

Interesting idea, having her take revenge. I rather like it. My only quibble is that this would be very good if it was a bit longer. It'd really help, I think, to get the point across. It'd be great if you turned this into a chapter story where there was a lot of deliberation on what to do, and a chapter to each victim. It'd facinate me.

Good job!
perfectpureblood
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
Wow, you've done a whole seven deadly sins thing here, good idea! But there's no positive Draco story! Oh well, I still love it.
HerFathersJoy
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
Hehe...Pansy, Hermione, Ginny? HAHAHAHA. I LOVE IT!!
imperfectperfection99
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
good
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