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Reviews for: Slytherin Sins: Pride
Wudelfin
2007-09-18 . chapter 1
that was just disturbingly sexy...wounder if she has the similar tendences about him?
Ski000Girl
2006-12-02 . chapter 1
This was my favorite of all of your seven sins stories. What was the book about?
The Sacred Feminine
2006-06-05 . chapter 1
Um... What's the book called? Can you tell me?? I wanna know -snifle-
Cascadas
2006-03-15 . chapter 1
please continue!
Cranky-puss
2006-02-06 . chapter 1
do a squeal, do a squeal, do a squeal or maek it inot a story. it's really good. i like it how you got it understandbale then the end but i think u should make it into a story that'd be good
x5x Nikki x5x
2006-01-28 . chapter 1
very interesting one-shot... though you should add on a bit more... i mean, i'm left hanging, wondering if she'll hex him into oblivion! are you christian by the way (either Protestant or Catholic, no specifications)? i don't mean to sound rude, i'm probably not the first to notice you've been writing these one-shots according to the seven capital sins... pride, envy, wrath (anger?!), sloth, avarice (greed?!), gluttony, and lust... hehe... such a coincidence that the day before i was asked to enumerate this. EXCELLENT JOB BY THE WAY!
Identity of the Nation.975658
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
This is a very nice series you've got going here. But, you might want to consider complining them into one huge story, instead of a series of one-shots, because this way, you'll get more reviews. Kind of troubling to have to go back to the main page or back to your profile page to get the next bit of the story.

Other than that, I really love the idea and concept of you making the Seven Deadly Sins into a Slytherin point of view. Slytherins are generally dark and unheard of in the Harry Potter series, so you've done a good job of exploiting that.

What'll you do next?
LuciousLadyLucius
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
I LOVE DRACO!

email me

PLEASE
Invaderk
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
Very good - i liik forward to later chapters

-Dayrunner
debarie
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
I haven't read the whole series yet, but I really like this one. You should really consider writing another chapter for this one - I love Draco and Hermione stories!
imperfectperfection99
2006-01-27 . chapter 1
pretty cool but that's it?
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