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| Soccer-Bitch 2006-12-25 ch 12,  | abuseawesome story! loved it! |
| Sanqhian 2006-04-07 ch 12, | abuseA good ending. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-04-06 ch 11, | abuseHa, judge's son or not, I'd shot the jerk too. Kudos to Eva! Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-04-05 ch 10, | abuseI love how you capture emotions. But really, someone in Speed's condition would not be doing all this physical stuff. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-04-04 ch 9, | abuseThough the chapter is lovely and I'm happy to see Speed in love; shouldn't he be resting? The last thing someone with a stomach wound should be doing is...Anyway. Keep writing like this, it's very good. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-04-04 ch 8, | abuseAh, Speed is such a caring guy. I miss him. This was a great chappie. I can't believe it took me this long to read more of this story. Sanqhian |
| Sanqhian 2006-04-04 ch 7, | abuseThere are a few spelling mistakes but it happens to everyone. I feel so bad for Eva. I've had days where every single thing goes wrong. They suck. Great job. Sanqhian |
| Dybdahl 2006-03-28 ch 12, | abuseI can't believe I managed not to find this story before! It's brilliant! |
| Sanqhian 2006-03-28 ch 6, | abuseOh, poor Speed. Reading this kind of made me relive a certain episode. I just hope things don't turn out the same way. |
| speedmonkey 2006-03-23 ch 12, | abuseAw! Speed said I love you! That's so cute. I'm glad to see that Eva is staying. I really enjoyed this story. Hope to see more from you soon. |
| randomwriting 2006-03-23 ch 12, | abuseWhat a wonderful ending to a truly enjoyable story. This was well written & your OC, Eva was nicely developed. I found her to be a realistic, yet interesting & likable addition to the team. I liked how Calleigh's personality came out in this chapter & how the team rallied around Eva. I loved the ending with Eva realizing that she needed to take control of the situation & of course, Speed, over the microscope ~ priceless. |
| Swift tales 2006-03-23 ch 12, | abuseAw! that was so cute! I absolutely loved it I think it's realistic how Eva held her own with the judge until she confronted with her rape and the way she crumbled after that, but didn't cry until she was away from him, keeping a semblance of strenght I really like Eva and I like the way she is with Speed Greets, Swift tales |
| randomwriting 2006-03-20 ch 11, | abuseVery interesting chapter. Twists I didn't see coming. Nicely done. Funny bit in the beginning. Poor Eva, she is a bundle of conflicting emotions right now. I eagerly await the next installment. |
| randomwriting 2006-03-20 ch 10, | abuseThink I said last chap was my fav, but now, maybe this one is. Wonderful job! Love the honesty coming from Eva, love watching the relationship between these two develop. It seems natural, not forced & is going at a nice pace. All in all, this was a strong, yet light & fun chapter~ a good blend. Oh, & kinda hot... just enough... Great job! |
| Swift tales 2006-03-20 ch 10, | abuseI love this chapter (I loved the previous one too, but I didn't have time to review) I love the way how she knows that this could be more then a one time thing and how she gets the vibe that he would like it as more then a one time thing too, but that she still has her doubts, which her very realistic The way you described how she recovered from the ordeal is very real too, it only adds credibility to her character Abby is a treasure, and I'm very glad she and Time seem to get along to well I like it when she calls him Tim, instead of Speed, because to her, he's not Speed, he's Tim... I hope I'm making sense here.. anyway, I love this chapter and I hope you update soon Greets, Swift tales |