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| holly juliet opal 2008-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abusecute poem! lovely! |
| Annie-morphs 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abuseThat was lovely! I totally enjoyed it. It's very good work, and I think you should continue making more poems. You have amazing talent. It even rhymes! I can't do that. At all. |
| XxEviexX 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I love it! ~HLA |
| aardvark 777 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseHi its sparky, Good poem uve got a talent 4 writing keep it up! |
| Izzfrogger 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abusewow, good poetry dude:) |
| By Grace Alone 2006-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWow! I love it! Great writing! |
| Stained Canvas 2006-02-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, that's really good. I luved it!! |
| Cinder McKnight 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's so sweet. Now wouldn't that suck if Artemis didn't return the feelings. lol. But of course he does. lol. :D |
| AgiVega 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was lovely... ryhmed and everything... I especially liked the last line. |
| Dim Aldebaran 2006-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWell, it's nice to poetry here. Not many at all in this fandom. A few of the rhymes seemed forced: "All the stuff we've done together/through thick and snowy weather," "In most adventures sat beside me/A change in you I always do see", "Ever since that day we first met, When I see you a feeling I get" Some others, on the other hand, were quite natural, like that final set. I'm not a AH shipper, but still, it's nice. Good work! |