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holly juliet opal
2008-07-26
ch 1, anon.
abusecute poem! lovely!
Annie-morphs
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseThat was lovely! I totally enjoyed it. It's very good work, and I think you should continue making more poems. You have amazing talent. It even rhymes! I can't do that. At all.
XxEviexX
2007-06-17
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I love it!

~HLA
aardvark 777
2006-11-02
ch 1,
abuseHi its sparky,
Good poem uve got a talent 4 writing keep it up!
Izzfrogger
2006-07-23
ch 1,
abusewow, good poetry dude:)
By Grace Alone
2006-04-20
ch 1,
abuseWow! I love it! Great writing!
Stained Canvas
2006-02-06
ch 1,
abuseWow, that's really good. I luved it!!
Cinder McKnight
2006-01-31
ch 1,
abuseAw, that's so sweet. Now wouldn't that suck if Artemis didn't return the feelings. lol. But of course he does. lol. :D
AgiVega
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseThat was lovely... ryhmed and everything... I especially liked the last line.
Dim Aldebaran
2006-01-27
ch 1,
abuseWell, it's nice to poetry here. Not many at all in this fandom.

A few of the rhymes seemed forced: "All the stuff we've done together/through thick and snowy weather," "In most adventures sat beside me/A change in you I always do see", "Ever since that day we first met, When I see you a feeling I get"

Some others, on the other hand, were quite natural, like that final set. I'm not a AH shipper, but still, it's nice. Good work!
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