So far, I commend you on a job well done. Everything is so fluid and romantic. It sounds really beautiful. Great chapters so far.

o.o of the three pieces, I like the third installment most...
very nice short fics!!
I can't remember much about my YuGiOh days though so I can't suggest anything.. sowwie.. >

Ha! I told you you'd see more of me in reviews! Hm...JouXRyou...I must say, it's original. :D You are quickly becoming a fovourite author of mine, and if it weren't for the damn parental controls me father has on me account (*wails* WHY!?*) then I'd get an account on this site and add you to me favourites list. As it is...I'll keep in touch!
--Arianna "Chisai" Emeraldstar