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Reviews for: Pride & Prejudice Continued: the Darcys' Daughter
PirateQueen716
2008-01-06 . chapter 2
Oh wow... i am floored...

Another great story you have added a sequel of sorts to. I am extremly impressed with your writing abilities. Pride and Prejudice was actually a novel I was reading just the other day, and thinking about the "Darcy's Daughter" LOL

Wonderful! :)
Toffy
2008-01-03 . chapter 2
I really like this story so far, it is very well written and isalready clearly setting out possibly plot lines for later chapters.

Great work so far, please update soon!
NaleyBrucas4eva
2006-09-10 . chapter 2
oh...that sounds a bit like darcy and lizzy when they first met haha oh well great start kan't wait to read the next chapters hope there are more lol :)
Ambergold
2006-06-20 . chapter 2
Absolutely wonderful, I can say that without reserve. Nice job of making Mr. Kensington Darcy-like without being too much like Darcy, and of having Kensington's thoughts as well as Harriet's. The only thing I would recommend is to condense the description of Mr. Kensington-any reader who knows anything would already know that to be clean-shaven was the style, and "a slight oddity" is a bit awkward. Maybe instead it could be "Mr. Kensington was fairly tall with dark, curly hair, a strong jaw, and dark, flickering eyes. Oddly, he also had a small scar on his upper lip. But most importantly.."and then continue. I enjoyed it very much though. If I may say so, better than your Ella fic.
Baiser
2006-02-03 . chapter 2
Yay! Another wonderful chapter. I loved the descriptions and how the story flows at a comfortable pace. You never overdue things and everything you write is entertaining. Great job!
Baiser
2006-01-31 . chapter 1
Wow, I really love this fic. I can't wait for future updates and love how the theme is taken, but not the entire story. Great job! Thee only thing I don't like is her name...Harriet? No offense, but it doesn't sound like a noble Dracy name like the classic Elizabeth or grand Fitzwilliam, but it isn't a big deal. Could you maybe describe Mr. Kenington's physical appearance more? Thanks, and fantastic job.
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