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| Fiorella Takaishi 2007-02-06 ch 3, | abuseshort, sweet, cute... NICE! Congrats! Kisses, Fio Takaishi |
| The Sushi Monster 2007-02-06 ch 3, | abuseWell, I'm guessing the first was from Takeru/TK's POV, but I dunno about the other ones. I think if you had written more instances and then made it a one-shot instead three seperate chapters it would have been better. But it was a good idea. |
| puasluoma 2006-05-23 ch 2, | abuseWow |
| the lost-kitten 2006-02-04 ch 2, | abusewow nice but kinda short |
| kingdom219 2006-02-02 ch 1, | abuseShort and sweet...perfect! |
| Sweet Cari 2006-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWow... this is starting off pretty good! Update soon! |