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Fiorella Takaishi
2007-02-06
ch 3,
abuseshort, sweet, cute... NICE! Congrats!
Kisses, Fio Takaishi
The Sushi Monster
2007-02-06
ch 3,
abuseWell, I'm guessing the first was from Takeru/TK's POV, but I dunno about the other ones.

I think if you had written more instances and then made it a one-shot instead three seperate chapters it would have been better.

But it was a good idea.
puasluoma
2006-05-23
ch 2,
abuseWow
the lost-kitten
2006-02-04
ch 2,
abusewow nice but kinda short
kingdom219
2006-02-02
ch 1,
abuseShort and sweet...perfect!
Sweet Cari
2006-01-28
ch 1,
abuseWow... this is starting off pretty good! Update soon!
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