Absolutely beautiful and incredibly written story. This is a scene we all wish had happened and claire/charlie had gotten the screen time to really work out their thoughts and emotions with each other before reuniting, though your story here really lays it all down wonderfully.

Thanks for the incredible read!

good work

Oh wow...
That was so beautiful.
So full of emotion.
I REALLY liked it, especially how it went from Charlie's complete dispair to the happiness of them being together in the end.
Very good job.
Best Lost fic I've read so far.

xxoo alyssa

Thats amazing, Wicked story. Write more!

I don't review stories very often, and I only review when I really like them or when they're really good. You have both going for you. I loved your story and it was great to read. The way you wrote it, how much emotion you put into it, made it even more beautiful. And there's also that little detail of it being a Charlie and Claire fic, my favorite couple on Lost. If only what you wrote in your story would really happen, I would be the happiest Lost fan ever. Thank you for writing such a great story! If you ever decide to write another Lost fic, I would definitely read it.

That was really amazing! I love it, and that is SO how the show should have gone! Amazing!!

O, awsome! I loved it! Lol, aww, I wish they would just let Claire and Charlie get back together, casue their the perfect couple! I liked how you added the phycic knowing about the baby having Charlie as father, cause now that I've heard someone say it, I kinda believe it. Wonder if he did know...
Awsome one-shot!!